Roll with me here -
Pieces
flying off my little truck
scampering down the highway:
That tailgater swerves and backs off.
/Smirk./
Oh look! Over there!
(Nothing to see here folks)
That cloud is crawling like smoke
under the San Jose Mountain
(is that the name? I can't recall) -
an underground cloud factory
letting off steam.
I like the idea of bits falling off the car and scaring the tailgaters. Maybe we could invent a sort of 'ejector button'.
ReplyDeleteSounds like the mountain agreed. Applauded. Amen!
ReplyDeleteHow could this be anything but true? I love the speaker's personality, which is more tangible than even the truck or the (what are they called again?) mountains.
ReplyDeleteSometimes the clouds are so heavy so they seem to have chthonic origin... I like the idea of an underground cloud factory
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